Smart Brevity — Why Less Really Is More

The Secret to Making Every Word Count

Hi Reader,

💡 Today’s Niblit: In “Smart Brevity: The Power of Saying More with Less,” Jim VandeHei, Mike Allen, and Roy Schwartz explain that the most powerful writing starts before you write a single word — by thinking deeply about your specific audience.

🔑 Key Insight: “Audience first” means flipping your mindset from what you want to say to what your reader needs to hear. This isn’t just good manners — it’s the difference between being ignored and being influential.

Think about gift-giving. When someone gives you the perfect gift, you know they really thought about you, your tastes, and what would make you happy. When they give you something generic, you know they were just checking a box. The same principle applies to communication — generic messages feel like spam, while tailored messages feel like gold.

Why does this matter? Most messages fail because they’re written for the sender, not the receiver. Data shows that roughly one-third of work emails requiring attention go unread. By putting your audience first, you immediately separate yourself from the noise and capture attention.

🦉 Nibble of Wisdom: If you try to speak to everyone, you’ll connect with no one.

🛠️ Practical Tip: Before writing anything, picture one specific person who represents your target audience. Write as if you’re speaking directly to them.

🚀 Quick Action: Take something you need to write today. Before starting, write down three specific things you know about your audience: their role, their main challenge, and what they need from you. Then craft your message with these insights in mind.

🔍 Further Exploration:

  • Learn about the “curse of knowledge” and how it might be making your communications less effective.
  • Consider how psychological distance affects how people process your message.
  • Ask three colleagues what they look for first when opening an email. Their answers might surprise you — and improve your writing.

🎬 Wrapup: Remember, your audience’s time and attention are precious gifts. Honor them by making every word serve their needs, not yours.

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Thinking of you,

Tom “your audience matters” Bernthal

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